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The two of you lay there in bed, breathless in rapture and simply gazing quite warmly at each other. Cotton sheets lay over you both, folds clinging to your every form and curve. Sharing a wide, white pillow both of you just stared at each other in a comfortable silence. His usually so slicked back hair had become ruffled, hanging over his forehead, which he wrinkled too often for your liking, like curtains of corn coloured gold. The lips which generally were twisted in a frown, or held stiffly like he was in the process of sucking a lemon, were now relaxed. The corners of his mouth were even twitched up in that rare smile he only used to flash at you when he thought you weren’t looking.

The coarse skin of his palm shimmied down your bare back, resting on your side momentarily before skimming back up to your shoulders. “Ludwig?” You were almost saddened to break the quiet that had descended over the two of you, but you broke it as easily like you’d merely touched a rainbow soap bubble and burst it. An almost silent chuckle left him, his nose rubbing against yours gently whilst his soft laugh still rumbled through his chest. “Ja, Liebling?” He answered, pulling back so his blue eyes were trained on your own (e/c) ones. Your next statement was an embarrassing one, you knew that much, but still you couldn’t prevent yourself from voicing it.

“Could you… speak in German for a bit?” You hesitated as you spoke, not knowing what kind of reaction he’d show you. A summery blush broke over his cheeks and he snorted, though a brighter smile displayed itself on his face. “What should I say?” He murmured back and honest to god, the slightly flustered yet happy expression on his face was the most adorable you’d ever seen. “Anything, just…. Anything.” You replied, feeling a blush lacquer your own cheeks.

Your German thought for a short moment, before cocking his head and sitting up. The sheets fell off his shoulders, choosing instead to pool around his waist. Because of his arms around your waist, you too had to sit up. “Well let’s see…. What have we got here….?” He muttered under his breath, one of his hands lifting to cradle your jaw. “Zwei schöne Augen.” His lips were lowered down to kiss both your eyelids, his own eyes closed. You noticed that his voice changed subtly when he started speaking in his mother tongue, making his voice lower and somehow even more alluring to you.

“Und eine niedliche Nase,” he whispered with a soft peck of your nose, “und auch ein himmlischer Mund.” A sudden smirk revealed itself, his teeth tugging in a composed manner on your bottom lip. A subdued squeak sounded, a darker shade of crimson settling on your blush. His eyes twinkled in mirth and he captured your chin in his hand, tilting your head to the side to give you a slow kiss. His other arm circled you and pulled you closer to him. Losing yourself in the kiss, you couldn’t do anything to stop him from falling backwards with you on top of him.

Your lips still sealed together, you fidgeted a little – not wanting to lie on him in such a way. You sat up and broke the kiss, your legs on either side of his body. He pouted, but yanked you back so your chest was touching his. His mouth had found yours once more, making you blush deeply at what his hand was doing – trailing up and down your waist and the back of your thighs.

“Was für eine anzügliche Position,” he purred when your lips were parted, his stare causing your face to flame even brighter. “Und hier haben wir einen Hals,” he pressed his lips ceremoniously to your throat, suckling on your jugular until a faint mark was visible. “Ein verlockendes Schlüsselbein und eine fragile Schulter.” Murmuring his words against your skin caused a tickling sort of sensation, urging a suppressed giggle from you. His lips stretched in a smile, you could feel it against the top of your shoulder.

“Ein weicher Arm,” he commented, sketching out a wiggling path down to the crease of your elbow, past it and down to the inside of your wrist. Tentatively he bit on the fold of skin just before your palm. “Eine zarte Hand.” Grasping your hand firmly with both of his own, he kissed it in the centre. “Die sanften Finger.” By now his voice had become a whisper, a mere breath. He traced down to your ring finger and back up to the knuckle. His last words were full of exaltation, and if you weren’t mistaken you could detect some sort of pride or triumph in his blazing eyes.

“Und ein Ring des Versprechens.”
Going through a German(l)y phase at the moment.... and trying to get over a slight writer's block.
Some of you might recognise the title from one of the polls (god those were useful!).
I think the time I thought this up was during my exams when I was trying to learn all the body parts in German.

Translations (and please feel free to correct me!)

Ja, Liebling = yes, love
Zwei schöne Augen = two beautiful eyes
Und eine niedliche Nase = and a cute nose
Und auch ein himmlischer Mund = and also a heavenly mouth
Was für eine anzügliche Position = what a lewd position
Und hier haben wir einen Hals = and here we have a throat
Ein verlockendes Schlüsselbein und eine fragile Schulter. = A tempting collarbone and a delicate shoulder
Ein weicher Arm = a soft arm
Eine zarte Hand = a tender hand
Die sanften Finger = gentle fingers
Und ein Ring des Versprechens = and a ring of promise

Thank you very much to :iconhyper-otaku: and :icontwoeye: for the correction of the German!


Please enjoy and comment with what you think, feedback is as always appreciated!
Should I put a warning on this? I don't think there's anything 'bad' in it, but someone might read a little too much into the situation in the beginning.... But please, feel free to imagine anything you want ^^
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I like this story...ANOTHER! *Grabs Shihagami and runs like hell*
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Shihagami Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Holy- 
put me down!

but thank you! 
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starwarriormizuki Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nawwwww germany is such a sweet guy.x3
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Shihagami Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He is indeed! C:
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starwarriormizuki Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
X3 soooo much fluff germany is the easiest person to use in stories like these isn't he?
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Shihagami Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More like, he's the most fun to use in stories like this!
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starwarriormizuki Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah!
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E-Sane Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much.
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Shihagami Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm very glad to hear it love! Thank you! 
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E-Sane Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob, I fell in love with it.
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