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You grumbled rubbing your sore hips and waddling into the kitchen. “Oh hey Feli, Kiku.” You nodded at them in greeting and the two of them greeted you back in their own way, Feli glomping you and Kiku nodding and smiling politely.

You caught sight of the large blond and playfully smacked his arm. “Hey, my hips are still sore from yesterday.”

He snorted. “Can’t help it that you couldn’t come fast enough.” You stretched your aching body and rubbed your neck. “You’re just too big, you’re too strong for your own good.”

The two of you continued your banter as Kiku turned red. Kiku was already feeling jittery due to your appearance, your dishevelled hair and scantily clad body was enough to make his heart thump. Though now he felt annoyed, his face not betraying his emotions of course.

Too strong? Hips hurt? Too big? Kiku bit his lip, only able to imagine what you and Ludwig could’ve gotten up to. The more you two bickered, the more he felt pissed off and he stood up suddenly, not being able to stand the idea of you and Ludwig doing things like that.

He grabbed your wrist and pulled you away from Ludwig, sitting in the other room with you. His face was red, how could he have behaved so rashly?! And in front of you no less?! He trembled with embarrassment and anger.

“Kiku, you okay?” He huffed at your question, which was very uncharacteristic for him. “I should be asking if you’re okay, what with what you’ve been doing with Ludwig.” He retorted sarcastically.

You moaned slightly as you rubbed one of the tense muscles of your shoulders. “Can’t help it, the guy’s just too hard on m-“

“Enough!” He shouted, leaning forward to press his lips briskly onto yours. “Don’t talk about him like that ever again, I want to be the only one to do those sort of things with you.” He murmured, pulling back, blushing profusely.

“Kiku....What do you mean? Ludwig forced me to train with him and my hips still hurt from the running. Also, that first kiss.....” You whispered, your fingers touching your lips as you flushed red.

His eyes widened in shock and he hid his face in his arms. Chuckling slightly, you patted his back. “It’s okay. I-I didn’t mind at all.”

You could hear him gulp and reply softly. “Re-really? Will you, will you be my girlfriend then?” He gazed up at you from where he lay folded on his knees.

“Of course!”
Yaay! Because I'm still sore from running at school (I suck at it TT^TT)

And because we passed the military base during the run, so this sort of idea popped into my head ^^

Please enjoy and tell me what you think, I love reading comments~
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furrykittys Jan 9, 2014  Student Artist
Wait if kiku had drity thougts... And he said only he can do those things to reader chan... 0.0 does kiku want to have *lemon bleep* with reader chan?!? ...*lemon + perv thoughts + kiku + readerchan = .... Nosebleed* hurr~ durrr~
XIamAwsomeX Mar 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
furrykittys Mar 20, 2014  Student Artist
Home7654 Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O.O.... (Backs away slowly)
Shihagami Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
KIKU! Well, I wouldn't be suprised if that actually happened between me and Ludwig......wat? I didn't say anything! *jumps awkwardly out nearest window*
Shihagami Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I need to say... Kiku needs to get his mind out of the gutter.

Lovely story~!
Shihagami Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He does indeed ^^

Thank you!
321BlueBlossoM123 Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
If the title hadn't been Misunderstandings and Sore Muscles, I probably would've had the exact same thoughts as Kiku~ xD
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